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It was night, and the moon was shining brightly over Syracuse, the Greek city-state. It was dark and quiet, except for Archimedes' house that was made of mud-covered bricks and some wood, where he was at work. This was not unusual for Archimedes to stay up late working on his inventions, but he had been working on his latest subject of study for many nights. He had taken up a great love for the defense of his home, by creating his burning mirrors, which were massive mirrors that would redirect the sunlight to burn Roman ships that were trying to invade Syracuse by sea. He would occasionally work consecutive nights on his defensive strategies. His working tonight would mean that he wouldn't have slept for at least four to five nights consecutively.
The conflict between Rome and Syracuse had been going on since the beginning of the first Punic War. During the First Punic War, Rome forced Syracuse, led by Hiero II, to sign an alliance, which called for Syracuse to pay tribute and provide grain to the Romans. When Hannibal led the Carthaginians to many victories against the Romans, many Syracusans were led to believe that they were allies with the wrong side. After Hiero II died, Hieronymos succeeded Hiero as leader of Syracuse. Hieronymos then started to negotiate with Hannibal. This action of Hieronymos led the pro-Roman faction to assassinate him. This action resulted in a long, bloody war in Syracuse between the pro-Carthaginians and pro-Romans. The pro-Carthaginians won the war and Hippokrates and Epikydes, two brothers who were of mixed Carthaginian and Syracusan background, took control of Syracuse. This led the Romans to send Marcus Cladius Marcellus to Syracuse to try and deal with the situation. When he reached Syracuse, he took drastic measures, including killing 2,000 Carthaginian sympathizers. This is why the Romans were going to attack Syracuse. Only, the Syracusians did not know when they would attack.
Archimedes had worked out all of the kinks in his burning mirrors defensive strategy invention. He had worked out all of the mathematical issues and equations to be able to exactly ignite the Roman ships or any other things that went in the path of his great death machine.
The Syracusan soldiers enjoyed it when Archimedes came to the field and would scurry around the mountains and fields setting up his inventions, because of the joy he shared with all of them when his inventions worked. Now, Archimedes was setting up a small model of his burning mirrors along a small stream and placed a small boat made out of wood in the stream and set it in the current. He saw the small boat go down the stream and then set up the mirrors to burn the boat. The sun's rays were redirected and the mirrors worked, igniting the small model of a Roman ship. Archimedes yelled, "Heurkea!" which means, "I have found it." He then gaily jumped up and down because he was so excited that his invention had worked. Now his master plan of defensive strategies were in order with the burning mirrors to supplement Archimedes's cranes that would pick up invading ships and turn over his foe's ships. He also had many other inventions that would assist the soldiers in defending their homeland, which were now in place.
Archimedes was a good selection for his position of director of defense, because he was very witty and was a very good warrior.
Archimedes continued to set up his burning mirrors over the next days with the help of the soldiers. The defense of Syracuse looked to be very stable, but looks can be deceiving.
Archimedes was getting more nervous as the attack was said to be coming. He would look over his plans for hours and hours, only occasionally stopping to have a little bit of cereal, a typical breakfast food that was made out of wheat. He knew that his inventions would not falter, but he was worried about how his soldiers would fight. He was afraid that the Roman soldiers would be more prepared and better taught to fight than his Syracusan solders, because of Rome's the long-standing tradition of being a very strong empire.
The next day, Archimedes went all throughout Syracuse to see how his soldiers were preparing. Archimedes checked everything at least three times and everything he checked dismissed his fears of a meltdown in the big battle that was looming. However, tomorrow was the annual celebration of the goddess Artemis. The Romans wouldn't attack on that day just out of honor. Would they?
That night after Archimedes had checked over all of the military, he was fearful once again. But he did not fear the inability of his soldiers, but more for the military taking off the next day for the celebration. He was worried that the Romans would not take any mercy on the celebration and attack without soldiers guarding Syracuse. Archimedes did not sleep once again.
The day of the celebration had arrived, but after Archimedes had not slept, he stayed in his two-floor house, which had some windows to let in the light. His house was right next to a very small one-floor home in which some of the poorer citizens of Syracuse dwelled. He heard a scream and figured that something small had happened. He then heard many more screams of terror. He could not figure what frightened the citizens, so he went out to the street to see what was happening, but could not see anything. He proceeded to go back into his home, where he had diligently been working on his dearly beloved mathematics, which out of everything he did in his life, gave him the most joy. Once he had started doing his mathematics again, Archimedes heard footsteps at his doorway. When he looked up, he saw a Roman foot soldier at his door. His worst dreams had come true. The Romans had attacked on the day when Syracuse would have no soldiers defending it. The Romans did not show any mercy to the Syracusians. Archimedes felt that he should have known better than to have believed that the Romans would respect their celebration.
When the foot soldier told Archimedes to leave the home so that he could loot it, Archimedes was angered and refused to leave saying that he could not be interrupted because he was working on mathematics. This statement of Archimedes then angered the Roman soldier, who then proceeded to drive his spear through Archimedes. One of the greatest minds ever was dead. His blood gushing out of his body and staining his short-sleeved tunic that was one of the most typical pieces of clothing in Greek communities in the Hellenistic time period.
All of the work that Archimedes had put into defense of Syracuse was for no good. The city was now in the hands of the Romans, but more importantly, Archimedes was dead, lying over his desk full of mathematical equations and plans of how to defend Syracuse, both of which seemed less important now the great Archimedes was dead.

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